Book Review: “The Jump” by Mark Paxson

Book cover for 'The Jump' by Mark Paxson featuring a silhouette of a construction crane against a sunset backdrop with the tagline: 'Nothing is as it seems, everything is as it should be.'

Every now and again, you get an opportunity as a reviewer to tell the world about a book before the world has had a chance to form an opinion on it. It’s rarer than you might think. When you review a classic book, most people have already at least heard of it. When it’s a book by a famous author, preconceived ideas based on that author’s other works are bound to color how it is perceived.

But this is a new book, by an indie author who I am honored to call a friend and who has yet to become widely known to the world at large. And more’s the pity for the world, because once you read Mark Paxson, you don’t stop reading him. You eagerly anticipate his next work.

Let’s say you are among the select group of people of taste and discernment who already do read Paxson. I am in this group. I’ve read his collections of short stories, and his literary novella, and his legal drama. I’ve read his coming-of-age novel and his psychological thriller.

Are you seeing the pattern here? Or, more accurately, the lack of a pattern here? Mark Paxson doesn’t write the same book twice. He experiments. He takes risks. He dares. He wins.

Which brings us, finally, to The Jump. What kind of a book is it?

Well, it’s about a dystopian United States where the President has declared martial law and sent squads of thugs, known as “the President’s Men”, to terrorize the population.

Now, I know what you’re thinking. That this is a commentary on current events. Maybe you don’t like commentary on current events in your fiction. But I promise you, it’s not what you think. Stick with it. Don’t assume that it’s some lazy attempt at relevance-by-real-world-reference like we get from so much of the commoditized entertainment industrial complex these days. It’s not that at all.

Which is not to say it is not relevant! Oh, it’s plenty relevant, to be sure. We’ll get to that, fear not.

By the way, I won’t explain what the title means. It’s not a spoiler, because it’s explained in chapter one, but the way Paxson describes it is unforgettable. I should know, because I read the opening of this story nearly a decade ago, and it stuck with me all these years.

The Jump tells the story of a man named Richard Bell, on a quest to avenge his wife’s death, which he feels he can only do by punishing the man responsible: the President.

Following after him are his children, who soon realize their father is out for revenge. Separately, father and children journey across the shattered remnant of the USA, witnessing haunting visions of Americana fallen into decrepitude, and patrolled ceaselessly by the President’s Men.

Along the way, they meet an odd collection of characters, such as Tobin J Oxblood, another man haunted by the loss of the country he once knew. And then there’s Tum Tum Run, my personal favorite character. I won’t say anything about him other than he’s like if Tom Bombadil found his way into a Tom Clancy novel. If that doesn’t make you want to read this, nothing will.

Needless to say, it’s a long, strange trip. As the cross-country journey leads inexorably towards Washington D.C., the central theme, taken from the President’s book of maxims, is hammered home again and again:

Nothing is as it seems. Everything is as it should be.

To quote another American President: “Write that on the blackboard 100 times and never forget it.” It is repeated in the book like a leitmotif, as well it should be. It’s really the key to the whole story.

I won’t say more about the plot here. Just know that it begins as a dark story of despair and revenge, and ends up in a place you would never expect given where it started. It’s a brilliant, mind-bending, plot-twisting odyssey through dystopia, told at every step with the emotional, almost poetic writing we expect from a Paxson novel. 

But now we come to the really important question: what was the author trying to symbolize in this book?

Okay, okay; this started as an in-joke for the Writers Supporting Writers group and our viewers. None of us are huge fans of analyzing the symbolism in fiction, and when I said I would discuss that in my review of this book, it was really a lighthearted comment.

And yet… the question nagged at me. There can be no doubt, after all, that every author is influenced by his or her time and place, the milieu in which they live. The Count of Monte Cristo is a classic that transcends its setting, but would Dumas have written quite the same book if the conflict of Bonapartism vs. Royalism had not been on his mind? So it is with all of us.

And moreover, each reader interprets any given book in a different way, based on his or her own particular experiences and beliefs. If I did not play video games like Metal Gear Solid 2: Sons of Liberty and Fallout: New Vegas, if I had not recently read books like The Image by Daniel J. Boorstin and The Meme Machine by Susan Blackmore, I would not have come up with the interpretation I am about to lay before you. But I did and I have, so I will.

The first thing to know, per Boorstin, is that, dating back to the 19th-century, America (along with the rest of the world) has been transformed by what he called “the graphic revolution”. Thanks to printed matter, photography, film, television and finally the internet, people receive news in the form of transmitted images, so much so that thinking of the image of a thing is more common than thinking of the thing itself. 

The second thing to know is that the human mind is primarily built on its facility for imitation. The smallest unit of a thing to be imitated is a called a meme, an analogue to the gene in the biological world. Thanks to Boorstin’s Graphic Revolution, these memes can now be transmitted instantly around the world, leading to people imitating “viral” (the word is more apt than many realize) fashions, fads, ways of speaking, etc.

This is the world of the internet, the super-connected noösphere of de Chardin; the world you are in right now as you read these words, and the one I am in while I am writing them. We are able to bridge the temporal displacement between my writing them and your reading them effortlessly, thanks to DARPA’s miraculous invention.

And note that that this is not quite the same thing as the real world. You know, IRL. Meatspace. There is a certain overlap, but the world of physical reality is still separate from the interwebs.

How does all of this relate to The Jump? Well, here it is, ladies and gents: Berthold’s Unified Theory of What The Jump is Symbolizing. Are you ready?

What happens in The Jump is what would happen if the world of the internet could be transmuted into physical reality.

That’s why so much weirdness abounds. The President in The Jump is effectively the influencer-in-chief, requiring the population to mimic whatever fad his algorithm chooses to promote. (Remember, an algorithm need not necessarily be electronic or computer-based, but is an ancient mathematical concept. The word is an Anglicization of a Latinization of the name of a 9th-century Persian mathematician.)

Similarly, especially towards the end, the story is increasingly full of metafictional references to other things. I’ll give you a hint: there’s a nod to The Princess Bride at one point. These fourth-wall-breaking Easter Eggs are more than just in-jokes; they are symptomatic of a ubiquitous feature of internet culture, i.e. pop culture references. Only here, they are shown in the physical reality of the world itself, rather than in the form of reaction GIFs.

In some sense, the act of “the jump” for which the story is titled is the concept of “rage-quitting” as manifested in real life. Which of course has a very different effect than when it is purely a metaphor for logging off. And yet, as biosphere and noösphere continue to converge… well, it does give one pause, that’s all.

Anyway, that’s my take on it. Of course you might ask, did Mark mean to do any of this? Well, I haven’t asked him, but probably not. But what do we mean when we say we mean something? Do I mean to write every word in one of these rambling reviews of mine before I sit down and type it out? Not really. At the end of the day, I’m just a monkey with an unusually high capacity for imitation and a really powerful typewriter. So I just start hammering them keys and see where it takes me.

The important thing, though, is that you really need to read The Jump. You might think my interpretation is complete BS, and that’s fine. One of the signs of a great work of literature is critics preparing bogus interpretations of it. The work is strong enough it can withstand any cockamamie reading anybody wants to give it. 

But people do have to read it! This step cannot be skipped. Set aside whatever political biases you may have, be you Republican or Democratic, Whig or Tory, Bonapartist or Royalist, and approach the book with an open mind. I can almost guarantee that by the end it will not be what you expected at the beginning. And above all, it will make you think.

Thank you for your attention to this matter.

16 Comments

  1. I haven’t read the book yet. I definitely will, but it’s going to be a while. So, taking this review standing on its own; it is excellent – well-written, engaging, and just the right level of information.

    As a side note, the effect you bring up predates the 19th century be ages, well before the printing press and even the written word. It’s the power of the symbolic (of which all components of language are) from small to large to modify and control perception. From cave paintings to totemic carvings, from the Pyramids to Caesar’s laurel leaves, from religious rituals to powdered wigs, and from the dawn of photography to national anthems; all of these uses of symbols skew how we see the world, each other, and ourselves.

    Hmmm. I feel there might be a Mephistopheles speech somewhere in there which needs to be written.

    1. I think there definitely is! 😈

      Of course, you are quite right, the power of symbols goes waaaay back.

      And, not to add even more to the reading pile, but if you haven’t read the book “The Meme Machine” already, I think you would like it. 🙂

  2. A copy of The Jump resides on my ancient Sony e-reader. I obtained it from Smashwords (which means I have downloaded the epub, something no longer possible with ebooks purchased from that other ebook store).
    Now that I’ve read your review, I will read the book shortly.

    1. Oh, and also, am I remembering right that you’ve never seen the movie “The Princess Bride”? You probably should, if for no other reason than to get the reference in this book. 😀

  3. In indications (or runes cast?) show this book has all the makings of an indie success. I wish the author well for the efforts he put into this.
    Congratulations on a true multi-facet review. Covering in depth the author, the outline of the plot, your own view on the writing and an intelligent commentary upon the issues which the author has raised. Anyone who is considering this book have all they need to know. (And you got referenced on Amazon on its blurb👍).
    Thanks
    (PS Thanks to your links I now have one to the ‘Office of The Historian’)

    1. My pleasure. Glad you liked the review. The book deserves to be widely read.

      And yes, you find interesting things in these dusty old corners of the internet.

  4. First of all, I’m blushing as I read this. You’re doing serious damage to my imposter syndrome. I might actually start to believe I’m a decent writer.

    I will neither confirm nor deny whether you got my intent correct. (How can I? I had no intent but to, as I’ve already said, just write a story.) But reading your analysis got me thinking … what if writers and artists just want to create something and the symbolism and meaning comes along in an unintended way. What if that symbolism and meaning just creeps out on its own in the telling of the story. What if that red door I always talk about when this topic comes up was made red by the poet because he was sitting in his kitchen while he wrote and saw a red tea kettle and that color just stuck with him when it came time to describe the door. Never realizing that red is the color of anger and his poem was all about anger?

    What if the meaning you find in The Jump was never intended by me, but still flows logically from the things that I did in the story?

    There are other things in your review I’d respond to, but this isn’t about me. It’s about your incredible review. Thank you!!!

    1. My pleasure. This review was a lot of fun to write.

      And yes, that’s exactly my thought on symbolism in books. It shows up in an unintended/unconscious way. (Or maybe that’s subconscious? I’m not sure. I hope Richard reads this comment; he’ll know. :))

      And yes, your imposter syndrome should be vanquished. You’ve written a magnificent book. It’s ahead of DFW, after all!

      1. Yes to all. Symbolism in writing can be intended (funny you should mention that Kafka guy) and unintended. Unintended as it can arise from the reader or a critical analysis, or subconsciously by the author because we’re all affected by our culture, lives, each other, yada yada.

        There’s also unintended when a book becomes part of the social discourse and a primary concept becomes well known making it a recognizable symbol even if you never read it (Moby Dick, Fear and Loathing), or lines from it (Most notably Willy Shakespeare. I doubt he felt “Oh this is a line that will be quoted enough to become a symbol.”)

        When I was in grad school specializing in Cognition, then Psychology of Language, I used to think about the power of symbolism. It’s become a favorite topic. I just watched a Lucy Worsley episode on PBS about the Royal Photo album and, of course, immersing myself in the Renaissance where art was realized by the ruling class for the effect of art’s symbolism to help them maintain their power and wealth. We truly are an immensely gullible species.

  5. What an interesting review of this read, Berthold. I like mind-benders, and that was my biggest takeaway, aside from some references to great characters. The internet manifesting itself in reality (if I interpreted that correctly) is a scary thing, and it’s happening already. What we believe is real, becomes real. Thanks for the introduction to Paxson and his book “Jump.” It sounds like a treat.

    1. Thank you. Glad you liked the review. And yes, it’s an excellent book, as is everything Paxson writes.

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