I got the idea for this story not too long ago, and once I had the outline down, I raced to get it all finished as fast as I could. This tale, which I’m calling a “long short story” (hat tip to Mark Paxson for that idea) is the result.
As I think most readers know, I love conspiracy stories with weird and mysterious elements–Deus Ex, The X-Files, The Mothman Prophecies etc. fascinate me. I’ve tried writing something in this vein before, but that novella left some readers (understandably) unsatisfied. I think I was much more successful with this story–it’s way shorter than Majestic World, but I think it packs just as much conspiracy weirdness into a much tighter package. But that’s ultimately your call to make.
Some other notes:
It’s approximately 15,734 words. I say “approximately” because I made a few edits after converting it from a Word document, and I don’t know how to see word count in the Kindle file format.
There is some bad language and violence, but nothing too horrible. I think it would probably be rated PG-13 if it were a movie, but these days, who knows?
This is easily the fastest turnaround time I’ve ever had between thinking up an idea for a story and actually completing it. Whether that is good or bad is, again, up to you to determine.
Finished 1NG4. You’ve developed an interesting setting. It was fast paced and easy to follow the action. This was a finite story, but there are infinite stories that could come from this world. Looking forward to more of them. Could a collection of stories be in the offing?
"[G]reat descriptions, sympathetic characters... The atmosphere with the hint of the supernatural…"-Barb Knowles of saneteachers.wordpress.com on "The Start of the Majestic World"
Congratulations on your new story!
Thank you! And thanks so much for the Twitter share. 🙂
Looks interesting, Berthold!
Thank you! 🙂
Finished 1NG4. You’ve developed an interesting setting. It was fast paced and easy to follow the action. This was a finite story, but there are infinite stories that could come from this world. Looking forward to more of them. Could a collection of stories be in the offing?
Thanks so much, Pat! Yes, there certainly could be; I would definitely like to do more with that setting. I’m glad you liked it. Thanks again.